Monday, June 25, 2012

Goals Essay (Draft)


Have you ever wanted to do something so much, but you aren’t sure how you’re going to do it? I have. I have always wanted to be able to write well. I wasn’t sure how I was going to do it, but I wanted to write. My interests have always lied in literature, may it be in Filipino or in English. Actually, if all else fails (meaning: my major – BS Accountancy), I plan to shift to a literary major. I have always loved reading, now, I want to “take it to another level” by writing. I believe that I have a creative mind. I will be able to tell great stories, and such. Now, I am given the chance to learn how to write in my ENGLCOM writing course. My writing course in ENGLCOM will help me become a better writer.

The ENGLCOM writing course is, fortunately, included in the subjects I must take as an Accountancy student. Others may dread having this subject, but I am quite enthusiastic to take it. I know that, somehow, it will help me be the person I’ve always wanted to be. This will be part of the challenge, and I am willing to take on it. I have set certain goals for this writing course. Actually, my goals are inter-related. My first goal is to learn how to write well. I’m quite sure that the professor will not make us write stories. But, she will ask us to write and that is what’s important. It doesn’t matter what kind of literary work she will ask us to write. As long as we will write, my skills will develop.

Another goal I have set for this course is to improve my grammar. My grammar is not so bad, I think. But, there’s always room for improvement, right? Besides, improving my grammar will result to me improving my writing skill which is the main goal anyway. My grammar does not have to be flawless. It just has to be something like flawless. I just want to be able to convey to my readers my ideas clearly.

The last goal, as of now, that I have set for this course is to improve my vocabulary. Again, this will aid in improving my writing skill. When I write, I don’t want to repeat my words too much. As you can see, my words are repeating more times than what is preferable. Improving my vocabulary will also improve my personal communicating skills.

The goals I have set for this course are not so impossible to attain. There are ways for me to attain these goals. First, I have to practice. I have to practice the things that were taught to us. I have to apply the lessons that we learned. If I commit a mistake, that will be alright. I will also learn from those mistakes.

Second, I have to take the lessons to heart. Whenever I write, I must apply the things I learned. I must take everything seriously. I have to try (very hard) to not commit the same mistakes. I have to improve each time I write.

Lastly, I have to read more. Reading will improve my vocabulary, and my writing skills. I will observe other writers’ techniques. I may use some their techniques, but I must create my own style. I have to be my own person.

Clearly, it is not so impossible to reach my goals. I just have to persevere. I have to keep my eyes on the prize.

Thursday, June 21, 2012

Goals Essay (Outline)



Thesis Statement: My writing course in Englcom will help me be a better writer.
OUTLINE
I.                   Introduction
A.    Question
B.     Thesis Statement
II.                Body
A.    Purpose of the course
B.     Goals
1.      Learn how to write
2.      Improve grammar
3.      Improve vocabulary
C.     Ways to attain goals
1.      Practice
2.      Take lessons to heart
3.      Read more
III.             Conclusion
A.    Summary
B.     Example

Monday, June 18, 2012

Diagnostic Essay -- Will You Really be the Judge?

I am an active user of the social networking site, Twitter. I have seen almost all kinds of "fans". I would encourage people to use social networking sites especially Twitter, but there is something I do not like about said site -- some of the people on it.

I am a fan of several people and things. I like comics and celebrities. My personal account on Twitter is public, so that I can reach out to the people I look up to who also have Twitter accounts. I try to let them know how much I love their work, but, somehow, people like me get judged by fellow users. Just because I like this certain band and this certain show, or whatnot, I am automatically judged to be this certain kind of person. There are several things we do not know about a person. Who are we to judge them just because they like, or dislike, certain things. And then, because a person doesn't like something (or likes something you happen to dislike), said person is automatically horrible or that person is no longer your friend.

There is also this group of people referred to as "hipsters". They are kids who like things before these things are considered popular. Once it gets popular, the hipsters no longer like them. At least, I think that's how it works. There's nothing wrong with that, but what I don't like about them is that some of them judge the people who like things that belong to the popular section. I mean, really? Will people really stoop so low? Whatever happened to keeping an open mind?

I just really cannot understand some teenagers these days. I know that I am part of this generation's youth, but I would like to step away from the chaos and ask myself, "Am I really a part of this? Do I want to be a part of this?" I know, for a fact, that this generation has a bright future ahead of ourselves. I've met very intelligent people who are just about my age.

Let's work among ourselves to change the world instead of being another problem in society. Stop the judging. Stop the hate. Live and let live! We already have enough problems in society; why don't we think of plausible solutions to those problems? We campaign for equality and all of those other things when we ourselves do not practice what we're "preaching". 

Let's just drop everything. Let's start over. It's not too late for us. Let's just stop everything we are doing. Take a good look at ourselves and the people around us. Let's reflect on the things we really want to happen, and start the change within.